I'd have formatted the support as External Shell (Chitin Lens)

It needs to at least be in the form, even if it's blank.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: n/a (integration group)

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: n/a (integration group)
• Internal?: n/a (integration group)
• Behavioral/Mental?:n/a (integration group)

Are Changes Realistic?: n/a (integration group)
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) n/a (integration group)

Habitat:
Type?: n/a (integration group)
Flavor?: n/a (integration group)
Connected?: n/a (integration group)
Wildcard?: n/a (integration group)

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?: Support is incorrect.

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?:
Does It Fit Habitat?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?: Not listed

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y, but...
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?: Thermoregulation is incomplete. These use their lenses to warm up, and this should be noted, the same as basking and shivering are for other species.

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Could be longer.
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Replace/integration
Other?: n/a

Opinion: Pending, see highlighted issues

How does it feed without tearing its face off?

Respiration is still missing.

This is still missing the diet of the ninjaswoop.

Please comment when you make edits. Otherwise, nobody knows you edited.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: n/a
Realistic additions?: n/a

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: n/a
• Internal?: n/a
• Behavioral/Mental?:n/a

Are Changes Realistic?: n/a
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) n/a

Habitat:
Type?: n/a (group submission)
Flavor?: n/a (group submission)
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n/a

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n/a
Within range?:
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?:
Does It Fit Habitat?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Transition Rule?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Some species integrated have additional diets other than photosynthesis and must be either represented or removed.

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Not listed
Does It Fit Habitat?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Description:
Length?: y
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: replace/integrate
Other?: n/a

Opinion: Pending; highlighted issues. Also, this will require descendants of some of the integrated species to have their ancestry changed. (Brieneux, Goldilackaruck)

It was wip for a while and you never stated you finished it, I believe that's where the confusion came from.

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Nov 2 2022, 05:49 PM)

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Edited

I agree. A stray line that's not particularly bold or eye-catching isn't a big deal.

Why does it both expel spores and attract pollinators? Also, that's not where the reproductive organs are?

Ferries are readily available, provide both fruit and leaf, and are both similar to the ancestral diet and easier to eat than it

That actually is multicellularity. Organizing and functioning as one organism the way oozes do is multicellularity.

Aren't oozes already multicellular?

I thought it was already un-global'd. That must be a newer edit.

As an alternative that requires no art edits, what about storing sugars from photosynthesis in the wings? This should make an effective natural antifreeze and make it taste more like its name.

What is the status of this

New teeth on the jaw that are not connected to the tooth making up the end would not be rigidly attached to the jaw anyway. A denticle partially covered by the lip-gums is probably what you want to go for.

Species cannot have stuff in species submitted later in their diets.

I see no issue with the nostrils apparently flaring to bring in air flow. Saucebacks already have fairly muscular fleshy faces.

I decided after a certain point that trying to list every single species whose eggs it eats is tedious with how many egg-laying species its range overlaps. I could clarify it eats eggs of specific descriptors.

I'd suggest having them migrate further south at least.

Gryphler's fuzz is technically an option, but plents urinate through their skin which makes it not the most ideal choice when other options are available.

@Coolsteph can you highlight what makes this pending in blue (if it's just clarification) or red (if it's actually rejection-worthy)?

As for the teeth, if the new teeth are true new teeth then it needs an equal number of new nostrils to match. If they're just denticles on the jaw teeth, like what the mangal sauceback uses, then no change is needed in the art but it should be clarified in the description.

*sausophrey actually isn't an ancestor of this, but the flight method is the same so yeah