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| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 23 2022, 06:56 PM) |
| Any updates on this? |
| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 23 2022, 06:55 PM) |
| Any updates on this? |
| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Feb 3 2022, 04:33 AM) |
| You say they can’t really defend themselves if caught out of the water other than using intimidation, but I feel like the bill could be used as an effective weapon by delivering a nasty bite. It feels like your phlock is more gracile than their ancestor, is this intentional? |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 29 2022, 05:44 PM) |
| "Overtime," Over time. "Fast growing": "Fast-growing". "Despite their lifestyle they are not strong swimmers[...]" This sentences needs to be split up: it's too long. "algae" What kind of "algae"? There technically aren't any algae on Sagan 4, so much as algae-like organisms. "help somewhat camouflage" I recommend re-phrasing that. "many defense" Many defenses. " food and warms." "food and warmth". "midspring": mid-spring. "out crops": Out crops. I wonder...does Fermi's geology even allow for outcrops? I assumed a flat beach, rather than something like the chalk cliffs of Dover. The fact they eat the displays once mated suggests the males only mate with one female per mating season. Does this habit align with having elaborate growths for the breeding season? Typically, in peacocks and deer, males mate with multiple females in a breeding season. Could you add some shading to the beak? This can't be approved until Colonialballs are approved. Alas, these just missed being food for the Hypnotizer Waxfaces. |
| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 30 2022, 07:04 PM) |
| Hm, so why is it uniformly purple? The soil it wanders around on is black due to its volcanic nature, so I imagine it should be darker in color. Perhaps the Rackettoon may be a good reference in how a previously purple plent may look on Fermi? |
