| QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:06 PM) |
| Glad these are getting some love, but as the newer rules state, the larvae's diet needs to be specified. |
| QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:05 PM) |
| The diet should include what the larvae eat. |
| QUOTE (WereCynognathus @ Apr 14 2020, 05:38 AM) |
| It wouldn't be able to use its coloration to hide in the shadows at night as proposéd by the creator of this Jvirus? |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Apr 14 2020, 04:42 AM) |
| "It will quickly dart away before the creature has the chance to attack them," Did you mean "they" (as in members of the species, collectively) or "it" (referring to a specific individual as representative of the whole species)? " Bloodfin Scylarian," The comma should not be there. "an unusual diet," The comma should be a colon. EDIT: Since this is Jvirus's submission, and I don't know if Jvirus will ever show up, should this be edited later in the compendium? |
| QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:34 PM) |
| I'm fine with this, as the dark coloration would help it to blend in with the seafloor. |
| QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:39 PM) |
| I suppose that this is plausible, though I am actually uncertain on how waterworms respirate. |
| QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:32 PM) |
| I'm having a little trouble determining the relationship between this and its ancestor, given the near total change in diet and lifestyle. |