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There's still the matter of the effectiveness of their camouflage, given their lifestyle and the exact forest conditions. There are a lot of colors to work with here, after all. It would help to specify how, where, and when they sleep, to determine how well-matched their camouflage needs to be under present conditions. (see earlier description on Page 1)

Being mainly nocturnal is likely but not definite, based on its cave-dwelling ancestor, echolocation, and no notes of it changing activity patterns, although its more recent ancestor, the Duohorn Bounder, having an image showing it out in the open where there's strong sunlight strongly suggests it's diurnal to some degree.

If its predators have sharp contrast or color vision, that would also increase the need for particularly well-matched camouflage, unless it has some measure to compensate, such as having guards keep watch over the herd and waking up and fleeing quickly.

Judging by a quick glance through them, these seem intriguing. I like the diagrams and extra views of them. I spotted a few typos while glancing through one: "overtime" should be "over time", and "vassals" should be "vessels".

Yes, it looks good.

Theoretically, if you quickly made a spore-spreader organism to be approved before this one, you could distribute the Fat Korystal, Dome Crystal, Polar Orbion, Fuzzy Beachballs, Sunleaf, and Retigroenx habitat-spreading to that organism, and consequently anything indirectly following those flora. That should cut down the number of species it indirectly spreads. (Spiny Wrigum, Climbing Korybug, Krugg, Billeka, and likely others.)

I have updated it.

Corrections made.

It's hard for a single, highly specialized, ephemeral species to replace a whole genus group. That's probably why I didn't specify it earlier.

I recommend reducing it to 1 cm and giving it supplemental nutrition, if there is no basis for its hosts' spores being especially nutritious. Giving it specialized gut symbiotes that allow it to be unusually efficient in extracting nutrition from spores would make it somewhat more plausible. (I wonder how big cows would get if not for their microbial symbiotes...) For the moment, "sporeivore" will have to work, if there is no alternative term.

I figure that they would be butchered once too old to feed themselves, or when the population is greater than the amount of scraps or waste their symbiotes can provide.


"While a rackettoon usually does make their own burrows, ":"its own burrows".

"rackettoon if they remained active" You meant: "it".

"snapperkys": You meant: "Snapperkies."

"-whether made by themselves or used by something else-" That needs an emdash.

I didn't change the spur on the braincase, but it has otherwise been updated. It should be ready for review.

I found some typos.
"ancestors skin" Ancestors' skin.
"To insure" To ensure.

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Jan 3 2022, 08:49 PM)
Any updates?


My apologies. I intended to update the art and description more than a week ago, but various psycho-social obstacles and a sense of malaise interfered with that.

That would be ideal, or, at the very least, you could sort by juvenile and adult diets and put the really rare dietary components at the end of each.

Spirepipe Forest Draft
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Spirepipe Forest
Creator: Coolsteph, The BigDeepCheatsy, Kopout

At time of evolution, Bonespire, Branching Bonespire, and Piperoot Colonystalks are keystone species to this environment. Piperoot Colonystalks pipe in water and desalinate it.

The Spirepipe Forest landmark connects many of the oases of the upper latitudes of Fermi Desert. The forest stretches from roughly [LATITUDE to LATITUDE], although it is not an even band, becoming more broken in the interior, with sparser trees. In much of its range, it’s more of a shrubland, but issstill distinguishable from Fermi Desert as a whole by a higher density of Bonespires and Pipe Colonyroots. The Bonespires’ roots can stretch farther than they look, so they still exert an influence in low-density areas. (CHECK) The environment remains desertlike because of the low precipitation and sandy soil, even if the moisture is retained better than the usual desert.

Abiotic Factors

Spirepipe Forest is dry and somewhat cold, with temperate, desert-like conditions. Due to the lack of moisture, trees generally don't get very tall. The places with the most moisture tend to support the biggest flora.
Over many millions of years, organic matter (such as decayed roots) built up in the soil enough to change its water-retention properties. The soil is black and sandy, though richer in organic matter than the surrounding desert.

Biotic Factors

The spire trees stabilize the soil with their roots and add a little shade; they can function as nurse logs or nurse trees. Their spores alter rainfall patterns on a seasonal basis.

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Species List Draft (Courtesy of Kopout)

Flora:
Keystone

-Piperoot Colonystalk
-Bonespire
-Branching Bonespire

Secondary
-Saturntower
-Meltbowl
-Bangsticks
-Gourjorn
-Greyblades
-Sunleaf (new)
-Fruiting Glog (new)
-Beach Carnofern (new)
-Beach Piloroot (new) (rare)

Maybe
-Greysnip
-Dalmatian Spinetower

Sunstalks, Pioneerroots, Cryobowls, Sapshrooms and Supershrooms are also present though shrooms are likely seasonal and Cryobowls are localized around oases


References suggested by Kopout:
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The real life temperate semidesrt island of Lampedusa Italy receives 319 mm, Alexandra New Zealand receives 359 mm and is noted to be right on the edge of being a maritime climate. Tempature wise Fermi is probably more like Alexandra but percipitation wise closer to Lampedusa ( Semi arid islands are fairly rare, especially cool semi arid as they tend to happen in continental interiors)


Some picture references:
Alexandra, New Zealand; right on the edge of being a maritime climate

https://image.shutterstock.com/image-photo/...-1411031645.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/cd/a9/66/cda9661b...and-central.jpg

https://i.pinimg.com/736x/cd/a9/66/cda9661b...and-central.jpg

https://image.shutterstock.com/image-photo/...-1613745439.jpg

Lampedusa
https://www.123rf.com/stock-photo/lampedusa...oi28mp4o6689y30
https://www.researchgate.net/figure/Habitat..._fig3_325082994

Correction: scrublands.
Do they feed on ripe Lurspire fruit on the tree, fallen Lurspire fruit, or decaying Lurspire fruit?

Although the Driftwood Islands habitat part is difficult to interpret, it otherwise looks fit for approval. (I went through the checklist, but lost the report.) There is one problem with the shape of the shell, though. It seems largely flat, like a flatter kind of chocolate-chip cookie. Improving the lighting around the windows and improving the shading should clarify the shape of the shell.


"grew overtime": "Overtime" is a frequent error. Is there a way to adjust a grammar editor to highlight that, just to point it out to you better?
How old is "old enough"? How far along in the tunnelglutt cadoverm's maximum lifespan is the harvesting point? That is, are they eating elderly ones, or ones in their prim?

"While the efficient respiratory system[...]vestigial" This sentence is too long.

that a few a year to occur,
"a few a year".
"While said ancestor [...]small objects" that is a very long sentence.
"offer"? Don't you mean "bare" or "present"?
Is it true live birth, or ovoviviparity? Do they have a placenta/placenta-like structure?

"Its ancestor's branches occasionally being knocked down, no longer leaving the branches floating." This sentence needs to be revised.

It would help to specify the shape of the branch-tips. Shading could help with this.

Here are some interesting references about intrapspecific (within-species) venom variations. It might be useful when describing subtle internal differences between different populations of the same venomous Sagan 4 species.

https://www.nature.com/articles/srep43237
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4963843/
https://www.mdpi.com/2072-6651/11/12/711/htm
https://www.jstor.org/stable/1565297

https://sagan4alpha.miraheze.org/wiki/Chromanke

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The Chromanke does not use its hind legs for climbing, only for perching. This is because their evolutionary history and atavistic return left them significantly weaker than the forelegs.


"Atavistic return" seems...odd, and I'm not sure if it could have this effect. Omitting it or re-phrasing it would be good.

Feedback is still needed for some organisms, such as Purpleblades, the Saturntower, and the Duramboar.

How soft are the eggshells? Are they leathery like snake eggs?
This sourcesource covers soft vs. flexible eggshell types. Snakes usually lay their eggs in damp soil. Is that the case for this one, too?

On a related note, it seems hard-shelled eggs can evolve independently, judging by dinosaursdinosaurs.

The fossil record of hard-shelled eggs goes back at least as far to the early Permian (298.9-272.3 million years ago) but the earliest reptile eggs were likely soft-shelled, but they have little preservation potential. Amniota (reptiles and descendants) originated in the late Carboniferous. (323.2-289.9 million years ago)

As a very rough back-of-the-envelope calculation to calculate the outer bounds of how long would it take to evolve some kind of eggshell: ~25 million years to 33.3 million years.

Wouldn't it make more sense to make a deep tunnel to the den, so that any hot air trickling in will be trapped in the upper layers of the tunnel? Or is it too difficult for something so large to make a long tunnel in soil that is likely sandy?

Polar bears (specifically the females) are the biggest living burrowing animals when they make their maternity dens in snow or earth. (structural referencestructural reference) The maximum size listed of a female polar bear is 2.4 meters, so 1.4 meter animal making a burrow seems plausible.

"beakl" typo.
"horny tip": I recommend "hornlike".

Hydromancerx, do you intend to revise this for this Generation?


Disgustedorite, do you intend to add any more detail to these in response to Colddigger's feedback?

It would be useful to specify in the description what MNIDJM said about the coloration of the disulfide antifreeze proteins.

" was found to be much" Active phrasing would be more efficient: "was much".
"The new reproduction method was much more successful, and replaced the population in Raptor Peak."
What sort of extreme conditions make it go dormant? Heat? Dryness? Cold? I figure that at least extreme cold would activate dormancy.
When you say "thick soil", what do you mean? Clay soil is typically the soil people refer to when they say "thick soil". Raptor Peak would likely have thin, rocky soil, not clay, although I am not certain about the likely soil conditions of Raptor Volcanic.