| QUOTE (colddigger @ Apr 4 2023, 02:08 AM) |
| For size if you add that the numbers listed are regarding wingspan, then we can have a very small thing. Too bad everyone has generally agreed that wingspan is not a very good choice, just because of artistic issues, so one to five centimeters long should suffice. How big are its ancestors? I feel like these things should really be less than a centimeter honestly, maybe next round. Then again they're offspring are immediately flighted aren't they? I guess it's their offspring that will be filling in the role of very very small flying insect, that's an interesting thought. |



| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Apr 3 2023, 03:56 PM) |
| You are limited to 2 wips per generation. Do not post any more wips. |




| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 31 2023, 11:40 PM) |
| > Major predators above 1m in size have a 50% chance of going extinct. That's the only extinction criteria? that would make it the least deadly mass extinction lol |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 29 2023, 01:37 PM) |
| "Dormant Spores (Worldwide ocean)" This is not a valid biome to put a species in. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 28 2023, 10:09 PM) |
| With the removal of plains and addition of beaches, this could be salvaged as a plausible descendant of coastwoodufo, which is a slightly smaller but very similar ophrey species that's already coastal and lives in the north Darwin subtropics (which border the temperate regions). |
| QUOTE (Cube67 @ Mar 28 2023, 09:12 AM) | ||
Is the implication that it should only make ammonia and not go onto the next step? Is there any particular reason why organisms that fill more than one nitrogen cycle step are problematic? |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ Mar 23 2023, 09:23 PM) |
| If it has not already been mentioned in the description, I would suggest just clarifying that the inside chamber where the free floating thermoplasts are located is quite well sealed from the outside to prevent infections or foreign bodies from getting in. I would also consider stating explicitly a means for thermoplasts to enter that chamber, for example having cells that reach a certain age and then there mitochondria shift in structure to form thermoplasts, this could be achieved by mitochondria just kind of breaking down into smaller objects that then are freely released into the cavity upon the cell's death. Alternatively just having a particular cast that buds off of the main layers and fairly immediately dies after forming thermoplasts in order to release them into the central cavity. Both of these allow for greater cell diversity in The colony kind of comparable to blue green algae. Although if you just wanted the cells to release the thermoplasts into the cavity on their own, without any particular caste system, should be able to work.. Just two thoughts on it, The concept itself doesn't have anything wrong with it from as far as I can tell, if someone wants to do a review on the submission that would be cool. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 21 2023, 12:51 PM) |
| They need to breathe. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 22 2023, 10:05 AM) |
| Genus groups need a region range, not biomes. |

| QUOTE (Cube67 @ Mar 15 2023, 10:37 AM) |
| Haven’t read this all yet, but I’ll transfer some of my earlier thoughts here: I think there’s a feature you should mention: lateral mandible serrations. They’re present on the corpse spardi, and should probably be present here too given the parasitic lifestyle (mosquitos have serrated mouthparts). They could (and should) be microscopic; I’m not asking for any kind of redesign. I’m curious as to why the ear of the middle species seems to be the same color as the blood it’s drinking. Is it coincidence? Is it meant to be flushed with blood? Does it serve a function to the organism? What’s the little red scribble below the mouth on the middle one? |
