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| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 2 2023, 06:31 PM) |
| @HethrJarrod I'm gonna assume this is taking over as your entry submission. That description is a tad bare bones. Could you elaborate on habitat preferences and how the spore casing works? |

| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Feb 24 2023, 11:43 PM) |
@HethrJarrod How are tentacles growing from the baits at the end of the tentacle? In all other primitive asterzoa, they regrow from the center of the organism, like starfish do. Also, remember, the baits in species this basal are structures extending from a cell like a flagellum, not organs or even whole cells which an organism can regenerate from. |
| QUOTE (Jarlaxle @ Feb 22 2023, 07:19 PM) |
| Information wise if someone wants to make a descendent for it it might be helpful to describe where the ventral openings are on the tentacles. Is it under the eye or around the enbase on the ventral side of the main body or somewhere in between? How do fragmented tentacles grow? Do they have their own gut tissue? Do they absorb nutrition through the skin? |
| QUOTE (Cube67 @ Feb 21 2023, 01:00 PM) |
| The only thing I can think of really commenting on at the moment is the odd grammar in the beginning sentence. The “unlike” sets it up to be a single-sentence comparison, but then the comparison extends to multiple sentences. It could be revised to not use the word “unlike”. |
| QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Feb 20 2023, 11:02 AM) |
Opinion: Approved |



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| it forms a unique structure called the triosseal canal, which houses **a strong tendon** that connects the supracoracoideus muscles to the humerus. This system is responsible for lifting the wings during the recovery stroke. ... As the thorax is compressed by the flight muscles during downstroke, the upper ends of the furcula spread apart, expanding by as much as 50% of its resting width, and then contracts. ..in addition to strengthening the thorax, the furcula **acts like a spring** in the pectoral girdle during flight. It expands when the wings are pulled downward and snaps back as they are raised. In this action, the furcula is able to store some of the energy generated by contraction in the breast muscles, expanding the shoulders laterally, and then releasing the energy during upstroke as the furcula snaps back to the normal position. |
| QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Jan 31 2023, 04:00 AM) |
| To be fair, if these are being created by a species wouldn’t the be constantly forming and breaking down? |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Jan 30 2023, 02:16 PM) | ||
Actually, as alluded to above, "Like the Ferrotine, the ancestor of the Coppertop, the Copperhead Octothermia, stored excess metal across its entire cell wall. In the case of the Ferrotine it stored excess iron, but in the case of the Copperhead Octothermia, it stored copper. This hindered their ability to absorb nutrients. The Coppertop no longer has this issue, concentrating excess copper it at the top of the cell." The entire reasoning for its namesake adaptation is just completely incorrect, as the sulfur it needs to perform chemosynthesis is in the water, not in the rock, so it should have just as much trouble getting it as its ancestor. |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 30 2023, 02:18 PM) |
| “ try and steal” (Try to steal) There’s a stray comma after “Shailnitor” in the diet list. “These oils”: That doesn’t make sense; just “oils” will do. It seems “shy of” means “just slightly less than”. You may have meant “shy away from”, although “it is not against” is more straightforward. However, “It will occasionally dive into the water” is clearer. Since you used “them” in the second sentence, saying “foods” in the first sentence, in the plural, makes more sense. There aren’t any organisms simply called “Ferrine”. You must have meant “Ferries”, the genus group. That little black speck in the art is annoying and conspicuous, but I’m going to say it’s a tiny volcanic islet seen on a very foggy day above the ocean and let it pass. |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ Jan 29 2023, 11:27 PM) |
| So they shake their leaves to release spores, do they still take advantage of small fauna walking on them? You could add that they also take advantage of outside disturbances to release spores and fall back onto shaking their leaves when that is not an option. |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 27 2023, 11:55 AM) | ||||
I did not forget the Oilicle. Oilicle predators: Mortusyte, Mortuprey Mortusyte predators: Umbrajet Mortuprey predators: Umbrajet Umbrajet predators: none. Lipids derived from Oilicles would have a hard time getting into these. As for the Mouse Gryphler....those don't even have overlapping habitats. Colddigger, I did just mention kiiros would surely have oil in them, and suggested the possibility they are lynchpins of lipids in the ocean. How many background biochemical assumptions do we need to make? Them synthesizing their own lipids from base components is still an option. |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 27 2023, 09:33 AM) |
| I searched "oil" and "oily" on the Sagan 4 wiki. The only results which would apply in these circumstances is how the Disorderly Gelatin (and likely at least some Twinkiiro descendants, e.g., Twinkiiros and Twinkorals) has oil stores. Unless Disorderly Gelatin descendants are secretly the lynchpin of oceanic ecology as a source of lipids low on the food chain, it seems best to assume it doesn't produce the oil like real-life waterfowl do. (Although, for such an important but uncommon claim, it make sense to provide a link.) |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ Jan 27 2023, 03:38 AM) | ||
yes |