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removed description about fusing femur bone

Approved by me.

QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Jan 23 2023, 10:52 PM)
@colddigger, @HethrJarrod, and @Coolsteph, is this to your liking now?


Image should still be correct. Added to main page.


QUOTE (colddigger @ Jan 16 2023, 02:27 AM)
oh!

might you add that supplemental image to the main submission so it isn't skipped over?

Could someone else do a second review of this?


.. wait, does that supplemental image still apply? has its reproductive method changed?


Thirded Approval

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?:
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: domestication by another fauna
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): possibly

Habitat:
Type?: 3
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Within range?: y
Exception?: n

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved;

QUOTE (colddigger @ Dec 21 2022, 11:20 PM)
Would it not be easier to just remove the tundra from the habitat?

That’s another possibility as well

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Bigger, forms large colonies
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?:Terrestrial, No longer symbiote of Cryoutine
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): possibly

Habitat:
Type?: Montane, Arid
Flavor?:
Connected?: no, The Tundra does not connect to the others listed.

suggestions: Should add Maineiac Badlands, Maineiac Peak, Maineiac Volcanic, & Lamarck Temperate Desert

Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: no
Within range?: not sure
Exception?: not sure

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Transition Rule?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:

Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:

Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:

Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: decent length
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?:

Opinion: Pending;

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Aerial root system
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?:
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): not sure

Habitat:
Type?: 2
Flavor?: 3 or 4
Connected?: yes
Wildcard?: possibly, not sure what the situation is when genus are considered.


Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: no
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:

Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Long
Capitalized correctly?: yes
Replace/Split from ancestor?:
Other?: Tropical beach archipelago is not listed on the map, a bit confusing. A map error possibly but any fault of yours.

Opinion: Approved;

Can we get updated art. its a bit unclear.

changed from Pending to Approved. just wanted to make sure you didn't want to swap this one out with something else.

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 15 2022, 11:16 PM)
Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?:y
Art clear?:y
Gen number?:y
All limbs shown?:y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?:y
Realistic additions?:y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?:y
Creator?:y

Ancestor:
Listed?:y
What changes?:
External?: ventral rays for crawling on ground
Internal?: all have lunged larvae
Behavioral/Mental?: lay eggs in mud, larvae are nonflying and crawl on ground, adults capable of crawling on ground and do, BAD SWIMMERS THEY DROWN EASY
Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why)

Habitat: STRAIGHT UP GLOBAL, EVEN POLAR?????
Type?:
Flavor?:
Connected?:
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N?????
Within range?: Y?????
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?:N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?:N
Transition Rule?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: carnivore now

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?:y, at least the lunglike ones
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: spawns in mud and veggies
Other?:

Description:
Length?: good
Capitalized correctly?: Y??
Replace/Split from ancestor?: SPLIT
Other?:

Opinion: Approved


Seconded Approval

QUOTE (colddigger @ Dec 10 2022, 02:41 PM)
I don't think need is something to base a pending on personally, if it weren't to be done kind of keystone species would it pass?


Its' basically passed but it s just pending until two other approvals
As a non-keystone it'd pass. Just kinda giving the opportunity to replace it if Dorite has another organism they'd rather have take its place.

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Bigger
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: Moved to new habitat, smashes mangals
Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): n

Habitat:
Type?: 3
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?: n

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Transition Rule?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Long
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved


Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: fewer wings, taller wings, merged into a trunk-like shoot
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: Female pheromones
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): not yet... but its descendant might

Habitat:
Type?: 1
Flavor?: 1
Connected?:
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: yes
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?: y

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: expanding the diet somewhat

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Good, Detailed
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved;

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?:
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: More inland
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): n

Habitat:
Type?: 2
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split,
Other?:

Opinion: Approved;

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Breaks down decaying organic matter rather than merely absorbing whatever detritus is present in the soil
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?:
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): n

Habitat:
Type?: 2
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: y, becoming a decomposer
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved

Approval Checklist:

Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?:
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Large root system for nutrient absorption and anchoring, Compound leaves, Bigger
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?:
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why):

Habitat:
Type?: 1
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: y
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?: n

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Medium
Capitalized correctly?: :thumbsup:
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved

Approval Checklist:

Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Specialized cells at the front and back for movement
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: Obligate Symbiotes to some flora
Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why):

Habitat:
Type?: Global
Flavor?:
Connected?: y
Wildcard/Keystone?: possibly


Size:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Medium
Capitalized correctly?:
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved;

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 30 2022, 06:20 PM)
Cool

Approved again


Seconded

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 30 2022, 12:04 AM)
approved

Seconded

Suggested changes for the description:


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Lately, a rather old group of aerial binucleids has been gaining new diversity, and this hasn’t left some of their closest relatives in the air unaffected. The Sruglettes are a fairly new group of flying fauna, even compared to the Srugeing which had only evolved a few million years ago. They have still been rather limited in their niches, being first and foremost mid-air hunters of small fauna and not managing much else, until now, that is. With the advent of many new diverse genera of flying Wingworms (ironically a much older lineage than the Surge Gilltails as a whole), the Sruglettes had both new competition and new potential prey items. One lineage had begun to become a bit bigger though, and began to hunt larger prey items in turn.

The Ruddy Hawklette has multiple adaptations to facilitate this macropredatory lifestyle, with a raptorial hooked beak and strong jaw muscles to go with them. Not to mention their much larger body size, which allows them to tackle much larger prey as well. Perhaps one of the most impressive feats that the Ruddy Hawklette manages is the hunting of young Songsauce Pipers, repetitively crushing their bodies in its strong beak while it drowns them by repeatedly bobbing up and down in the water as it does with other large prey like Dragonworms and larger Sruglettes. Smaller prey is most often swallowed whole mid-air as it is caught. The Ruddy Hawklette is quite fond of Wingworm prey, even chasing down stinkers as it lacks an advanced olfactory system and its tastebuds aren’t particularly sensitive, and being mostly too fast and agile for the predators that would usually find it by smell after it gets stung by one of the worms.

Also of note is an enlarged section of fin ray in the wings, acting analogously to the pterostigma of some Terran insects, most relevantly dragonflies, allowing the Ruddy Hawklette to glide for some distance without being interrupted by wing flutter; this function is important not only for hunting and conserving energy in flight, but also is somewhat important for their reproduction, which will be covered later.

The Ruddy Hawklette is surprisingly lacking in its own predators, likely due to its roughly intermediate size (too small to be a worthy target for the Coastwoodufo, too large to be hunted by Interbiats or predatory Wingworms) and agility, often flitting about much like a dragonfly even through the fairly dense rainforest and over the wetlands. Its young, on the other hand, do not have such a luxury, being born small and vulnerable from eggs deposited during a rather messy spawning ritual. The adult Ruddy Hawklettes will pair up and then skim the water alongside each other, mixing the eggs and milt around by wiggling their tail fins as they do so. The eggs will rest scattered in loose lines on the muddy riverbed (though they will lay them in smaller bodies of water like ponds as well, the ecological standpoint provided applies to the Northern Terra Tropical River and Ichthy Tropical River due to their permanency) and eventually hatch after a matter of days, the fry being rather large and well-developed, which is important for the next step in their survival. They start out transparent, seeking out the distinctive scent of Snotflora, Marbleflora, or Toxiglobes and gorging themselves on them. Rather than being fatally poisoned by this dietary choice, the larvae incorporate the toxins of these flora into their flesh, eventually turning a bright red as they mature further to advertise their acquired toxicity to predators like the Wadesnapper or Netoris Ukjaw, albeit many are still consumed as they are still rather small and contain low concentrations of the toxins. As they reach a larger size however, they experience much less of this predation, as they become significantly toxic from their time of feeding on the poisonous flora. Upon reaching this stage, they become much more generalist, consuming a wider range of flora and beginning to hunt down fauna to fuel their rapid growth.

Indeed, by only their fourth week of life, these “harings” may be seen leaping out of the water and flapping their pectoral fins in short glides, preparing their wing muscles for an adult life of nearly constant flight; their development does slow quite a bit in regards to size by this time however. Regardless of the reduction in size increase, they will still become mostly free of the water by the seventh week, buzzing along through the forest like their parents, who will most likely indeed happen to meet them, as Ruddy Hawklettes do have a fairly long lifespan (for a Sruglette) of 4 or so Saganian years; which is fairly easy for them to attain as they are not limited by a temperate climate and are a good bit larger than most other species in their genus, as well as the aforementioned disturbing lack of significant predators. It should be noted that adult Ruddy Hawklettes are mostly non-toxic, and contain either negligible amounts of or no toxins in their flesh due to the fact that, for obvious reasons, adult Ruddy Hawklettes are no longer consuming the toxic flora that they would obtain these poisons from.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?:y
Art clear?:y
Gen number?:y
All limbs shown?:y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?:y
Realistic additions?:y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?:y
Creator?:y

Ancestor:
Listed?:y
What changes?:
External?: Hook beak, Enlarged fin rays in wings for gliding,
Internal?: Larvae incorporates dietary toxins
Behavioral/Mental?: Bobbing drowning of prey
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why)

Habitat:
Type?: 1
Flavor?: 3
Connected?:
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?:n
Within range?:y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?:n
Transition Rule?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: good
Capitalized correctly?: needs work, but easy to fix.
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?:
Capitalization of Proper Nouns. Ruddy Hawklette, Toxiglobes, Stinkers, etc.

Opinion: Approved.

Review:

Art:
Present: y
Clear: y
Generation #: y
All limbs shown: y
Reasonable compared to Ancestor: y
Realistic additions: y

Name:
Binomial: y
Creator: y

Ancestor:
Listed: y
Changes:
  • External: Redeveloped eye,
  • Internal: n/a
  • Behavioral: Colonialism, Mucus-driven reproduction method
Changes realistic: y
New genus needed: no

Habitat:
type: 1
flavor: 1
connected: n/a
wildcard: no

Size:
Same as ancestor: n
Within Range: y
Exception:

Support:
Same as Ancestor: y
Fit habitat: y
Changes reasonable:

Diet:
Same as ancestor: y
Fit habitat: y
Changes reasonable:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?:n
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: yes
Other?:

Description:
Length?: medium
Capitalized correctly?:y
Replace/Split from ancestor?:split
Other?:


Opinion: Approved

QUOTE (colddigger @ Oct 2 2022, 09:11 PM)

Opinion: Approved


Seconded

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 3 2022, 08:13 PM)


Opinion: Approved


Seconded