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"grew overtime": "Overtime" is a frequent error. Is there a way to adjust a grammar editor to highlight that, just to point it out to you better?
How old is "old enough"? How far along in the tunnelglutt cadoverm's maximum lifespan is the harvesting point? That is, are they eating elderly ones, or ones in their prim?

"While the efficient respiratory system[...]vestigial" This sentence is too long.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Dec 27 2021, 02:41 PM)

"grew overtime": "Overtime" is a frequent error. Is there a way to adjust a grammar editor to highlight that, just to point it out to you better? How old is "old enough"? How far along in the tunnelglutt cadoverm's maximum lifespan is the harvesting point? That is, are they eating elderly ones, or ones in their prim? "While the efficient respiratory system[...]vestigial" This sentence is too long.

Fixed the grammatical error and broke up the extra-long sentence as best as I could.

Hm.....how long do you think cadoverms would live in general? I imagine these guys would be butchered once they become pretty old and maybe unable to properly feed themselves anymore.

QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Dec 28 2021, 01:09 PM)

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Dec 27 2021, 02:41 PM) "grew overtime": "Overtime" is a frequent error. Is there a way to adjust a grammar editor to highlight that, just to point it out to you better? How old is "old enough"? How far along in the tunnelglutt cadoverm's maximum lifespan is the harvesting point? That is, are they eating elderly ones, or ones in their prim? "While the efficient respiratory system[...]vestigial" This sentence is too long. Fixed the grammatical error and broke up the extra-long sentence as best as I could. Hm.....how long do you think cadoverms would live in general? I imagine these guys would be butchered once they become pretty old and maybe unable to properly feed themselves anymore.

Any comments on this? I can't really change anything at the moment without some feedback.

I figure that they would be butchered once too old to feed themselves, or when the population is greater than the amount of scraps or waste their symbiotes can provide.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 14 2022, 01:23 AM)

I figure that they would be butchered once too old to feed themselves, or when the population is greater than the amount of scraps or waste their symbiotes can provide.

Alright, added in some extra information.