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I'll have to go over this later, but for now, some cursory feedback.

"mangles" You meant "mangals", as in mangrove swamps.

Do Squaphaneers travel fast enough, or have slow enough digestive transit times, to plausibly spread qupe trees and fuzzweeds?

that third one is pretty different.

I would consider possibly making that trait common to all members, but typically only occurring in situations of dense populations or close proximity, with it becoming highly apparent in those species that specialize more for those situations.

This post has been edited by colddigger: Oct 26 2022, 06:14 PM

Approval Checklist:

Art:

Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:
External?: Aerial root system
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?:
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed? (If yes, list why): not sure

Habitat:
Type?: 2
Flavor?: 3 or 4
Connected?: yes
Wildcard?: possibly, not sure what the situation is when genus are considered.


Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: no
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:

Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y
Other?:

Description:
Length?: Long
Capitalized correctly?: yes
Replace/Split from ancestor?:
Other?: Tropical beach archipelago is not listed on the map, a bit confusing. A map error possibly but any fault of yours.

Opinion: Approved;

@kopout:

Some minor feedback:
“As these islands”: I recommend splitting the sentence with a comma: it’s long.
“were out,” Wear out.
“Common.Species” A minor spacing error.
“Wind blown” -> wind-blown.
Thermoregulation: Flora are surely ectotherms by default.
Support: I don’t know for certain for this lineage, but cell walls and cellulose are likely.


Otherwise, this looks suited for approval. Strictly speaking, these things are so minor they could easily be corrected after approval on the wiki, due to the typo correction rule.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Dec 29 2022, 03:07 AM)

@kopout: Some minor feedback: “As these islands”: I recommend splitting the sentence with a comma: it’s long. “were out,” Wear out. “Common.Species” A minor spacing error. “Wind blown” -> wind-blown. Thermoregulation: Flora are surely ectotherms by default. Support: I don’t know for certain for this lineage, but cell walls and cellulose are likely. Otherwise, this looks suited for approval. Strictly speaking, these things are so minor they could easily be corrected after approval on the wiki, due to the typo correction rule.

I corrected these. It's now fit for approval.