| QUOTE (colddigger @ Mar 23 2023, 09:23 PM) |
| If it has not already been mentioned in the description, I would suggest just clarifying that the inside chamber where the free floating thermoplasts are located is quite well sealed from the outside to prevent infections or foreign bodies from getting in. I would also consider stating explicitly a means for thermoplasts to enter that chamber, for example having cells that reach a certain age and then there mitochondria shift in structure to form thermoplasts, this could be achieved by mitochondria just kind of breaking down into smaller objects that then are freely released into the cavity upon the cell's death. Alternatively just having a particular cast that buds off of the main layers and fairly immediately dies after forming thermoplasts in order to release them into the central cavity. Both of these allow for greater cell diversity in The colony kind of comparable to blue green algae. Although if you just wanted the cells to release the thermoplasts into the cavity on their own, without any particular caste system, should be able to work.. Just two thoughts on it, The concept itself doesn't have anything wrong with it from as far as I can tell, if someone wants to do a review on the submission that would be cool. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 29 2023, 01:37 PM) |
| "Dormant Spores (Worldwide ocean)" This is not a valid biome to put a species in. |