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All the habitats in between must be listed. All species must be listed by name and I don't think it's gonna find shrews small enough to eat out there.

Body length needs to be included.

Hopefully I fixed it. Thanks

QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 20 2022, 11:09 AM)

All the habitats in between must be listed. All species must be listed by name and I don't think it's gonna find shrews small enough to eat out there. Body length needs to be included.

New artwork...
need some help with habitats and diet

Added more extensive Habitat and Diet

This post has been edited by HethrJarrod: Sep 28 2022, 03:07 PM

Can I recommend making the white pupils more obvious in the artwork? So it's not misinterpreted down the line

It should probably also be a new genus.

Judging by the Ivy Thermoworm, is it the case that it collects food for its courtship cache whole, or doesn't rip it up much?

It doesn't rip it up much. If its small enough like nuts/berries, or a small kill, it would be whole.
But if its big, tearing off a piece of meat from a kill or a carcass is what it normally does.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Oct 17 2022, 08:37 PM)

Judging by the Ivy Thermoworm, is it the case that it collects food for its courtship cache whole, or doesn't rip it up much?

is this a WIP?

is this not being updated any more?

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 8 2022, 08:52 PM)

is this a WIP? is this not being updated any more?

This one is not a WIP

and its just nobody has pointed out any errors that need fixing.

" Because of its oil rich diet, its feathers can get wet. It is not shy of diving into the water to grab onto a juicy looking Gillfin or other prey."




It's feathers get wet because of its oily diet?

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 9 2022, 07:56 PM)

" Because of its oil rich diet, its feathers can get wet. It is not shy of diving into the water to grab onto a juicy looking Gillfin or other prey." It's feathers get wet because of its oily diet?

corrected to:
"Because of its oil rich diet, its feathers are waterproof."

It's kinda like the Aquatic birds on earth.

I suggest mentioning that the wings are now shaped for active soaring rather than passive soaring like its ancestor. Since you are seeming to aim for that body shape and lifestyle.

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 9 2022, 11:01 PM)

I suggest mentioning that the wings are now shaped for active soaring rather than passive soaring like its ancestor. Since you are seeming to aim for that body shape and lifestyle.

Added in. 👍

@Evolutionincarnate how do you feel about the coracoid thing in this one? (see op)

Evo didn't reply, but the more I think on this the less sure I am that the coracoid thing can really work. The flapping muscles only pull on the femur - how is this flapping from the knee?

Fortunately, changing it wouldn't affect the art and the pouch can be explained another way.