| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Jan 26 2023, 08:22 PM) |
| " Because of its oil rich diet, its feathers are waterproof." Aren't oils that animals use for waterproofing usually produced by their own glands? |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ Jan 27 2023, 03:38 AM) | ||
yes |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 27 2023, 09:33 AM) |
| I searched "oil" and "oily" on the Sagan 4 wiki. The only results which would apply in these circumstances is how the Disorderly Gelatin (and likely at least some Twinkiiro descendants, e.g., Twinkiiros and Twinkorals) has oil stores. Unless Disorderly Gelatin descendants are secretly the lynchpin of oceanic ecology as a source of lipids low on the food chain, it seems best to assume it doesn't produce the oil like real-life waterfowl do. (Although, for such an important but uncommon claim, it make sense to provide a link.) |
| QUOTE (HethrJarrod @ Jan 27 2023, 06:12 AM) | ||||
If waterfowl don’t get the fatty oils they need from their diet, their feathers lose their waterproofness Changed the description to clarify: “Because of its oil rich diet, it has a special gland that processes these oils, with which the Albedophrey uses to make its feathers waterproof, similar to a duck or other waterfowl.” |
| QUOTE (HethrJarrod @ Jan 27 2023, 09:02 AM) | ||
You’re also forgetting the Oilicle and a few others. And The Mouse Gryphler does this as well. https://sagan4alpha.miraheze.org/wiki/Mouse_Gryphler |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 27 2023, 11:55 AM) | ||||
I did not forget the Oilicle. Oilicle predators: Mortusyte, Mortuprey Mortusyte predators: Umbrajet Mortuprey predators: Umbrajet Umbrajet predators: none. Lipids derived from Oilicles would have a hard time getting into these. As for the Mouse Gryphler....those don't even have overlapping habitats. Colddigger, I did just mention kiiros would surely have oil in them, and suggested the possibility they are lynchpins of lipids in the ocean. How many background biochemical assumptions do we need to make? Them synthesizing their own lipids from base components is still an option. |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 30 2023, 02:18 PM) |
| “ try and steal” (Try to steal) There’s a stray comma after “Shailnitor” in the diet list. “These oils”: That doesn’t make sense; just “oils” will do. It seems “shy of” means “just slightly less than”. You may have meant “shy away from”, although “it is not against” is more straightforward. However, “It will occasionally dive into the water” is clearer. Since you used “them” in the second sentence, saying “foods” in the first sentence, in the plural, makes more sense. There aren’t any organisms simply called “Ferrine”. You must have meant “Ferries”, the genus group. That little black speck in the art is annoying and conspicuous, but I’m going to say it’s a tiny volcanic islet seen on a very foggy day above the ocean and let it pass. |