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Birds also have air in their heads.

Fine, I still feel like we're applying a terrestrial intuition about head size that shouldn't apply to saucebacks proboscis (a hollow oral tube is a literal air pipe) but it's not that important for the concept and future lineages, so if it increases believability... Fine.

I've Updated the female head size

This post has been edited by Jarlaxle: Dec 2 2022, 05:56 AM

Are there any further comments on this? I'm gonna ignore the first approval bc a species should never be marked approved before there have been any comments, and there was a whole discussion afterwards.

Doesn't really seem like it.

Approval Checklist:
Art: Y
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:
External?: larger lips, females lose tusks to form a basic non-tidal filtering system with their mouth. toe covers for catching underwater prey
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: dietary distinctions between females, young, and males
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: Done

Habitat:
Type?: 3
Flavor?: 3
Connected?: : Y
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?:Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Transition Rule?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?:Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?:Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?:Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Replaced
Other?:
Opinion: Approved

Seconded

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Feb 20 2023, 11:02 AM)

Opinion: Approved