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So uh....any comments on these?

Make sure to say groove rather than grove when referring to the tusk channel

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?:
What changes?:

• External?: Feather colors,
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?: Echolocation hunting

Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) N

Habitat:
Type?: 2
Flavor?: 2
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: Should this be sangivorous?

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?:NO
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Pending (See above)

Made the change in diet term. How does it look now?

I myself think the species looks good, but what do the rest of you think. Since you did post a review on here @MNIDJM, mind giving your opinions since the diet bit was addressed?