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" quickly began to shift into actively predation."

should say active predation

"chase their prey into the upper trophoshpere"

a word is spelled wrong

"however the generally will not touch"

they generally








". If saucebacks aren't available they will scavenging for relatively"

they will scavenge

Where did you come up with that name?

QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Feb 15 2023, 05:21 AM)

Where did you come up with that name?

It's based of the proto-Finnic words for "eggshell/insect exoskeleton" and "eagle"

QUOTE (colddigger @ Feb 13 2023, 06:24 AM)

" quickly began to shift into actively predation." should say active predation "chase their prey into the upper trophoshpere" a word is spelled wrong "however the generally will not touch" they generally ". If saucebacks aren't available they will scavenging for relatively" they will scavenge

Typos fixed

I don't think I see anything immediately wrong or broken with this submission, if someone wants to do the review thing.

Yeah, I shouldn’t do it for my own, so I need someone else to do it for me.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?:y
Art clear?:y
Gen number?:y
All limbs shown?:y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?:y
Realistic additions?:y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?:y
Creator?:y

Ancestor:
Listed?:y
What changes?:
External?:
Internal?:
Behavioral/Mental?: group hunting of flying saucers
Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: not really

Habitat:
Type?:3
Flavor?: 3
Connected?:y
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: kind of
Transition Rule?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: addition of egg eating

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: good
Capitalized correctly?:
Replace/Split from ancestor?:
Other?:

Opinion: Approved

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