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haha oops, I forgot the habitats



It's been fixed, I'd like to use this comment and edit it so that I can mention that the image doesn't display a tree with the maximum number of branches. More often you're going to get trees that have branches all around the trunk, but then you would not be able to see the trunk. And I think with this particular species being able to witness its entire body without it obscuring itself visually is rather important.

This post has been edited by colddigger: Apr 3 2023, 11:11 PM

Looks good to me.

Does anyone have a constructive comment before I give this a review?

Kernel Cornucopia

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown? y:
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: Bigger
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?:Leaves are shed

Are Changes Realistic?: yes
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why)

Habitat:
Type?: Temperate
Flavor?: Mixed Scrub, Woodland, Volcanic
Connected to Ancestor?: y
Contiguous?: yes
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: y
Does It Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Transition Rule?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Does it Fit Size?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Description:
Length?: long
Capitalized correctly?: yes, afaik
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?:


Opinion: Approved



This post has been edited by HethrJarrod: May 9 2023, 03:40 AM

Okay edited in, can you double check the map that it still is contiguous?

QUOTE (colddigger @ May 8 2023, 11:35 PM)

Okay edited in, can you double check the map that it still is contiguous?

yep it is.

Changed to approved.