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You should combine the Volleypoms into a genus.

I disagree.

Does anyone have a constructive comment before I give this a review?

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Optional: Like for the previous review, having visible leaf stalks would be ideal, but from this distance and resolution it would be very difficult to do, and it’s not really necessary anyway.

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I’ll have to double-check the habitat later.
The usual feedback for Volleypoms: spacing, capitalization, and heliothermy changes are needed.

Description
“Fast growing”: “fast-growing”.
“Nobby”: while “nobby” is a word, it’s not applicable here. You likely meant “knobby”.
“Fast growing”: “fast-growing”.
“In which”: It is better to omit this.
“Ancestral organs”: I suppose a leaf is an organ, but it does sound odd. Did you mean “origins”? If so, “ancestral origins” is redundant.
“As these leaves, black, white”: It’s best to put the chain of adjectives before “leaves”.
“However with”: this doesn’t sound quite right. “But with” is surely more appropriate.
“Only difference”: The only difference.

Misc.
I’m glad these aren’t a genus. Not everything needs to be a genus. It’s good that people want to make trees. (Especially short trees. I am fond of short trees.)
I like the adaptations of this genus to various pest species. It would surely help them carve out a niche in certain environments, and perhaps help them compete with more genetically diverse flora genus groups that are nonetheless poorly adapted to parasites.

edits were added

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Half Size, Dense Clumped Branches, Shrunken Megaspores
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?:

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: Y (Done)

Habitat:
Type?: 2/3
Flavor?: 1/3
Connected to Ancestor?: Y
Contiguous?: Y
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: Y
Does It Fit Size?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Does it Fit Size?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved

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