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Name: Coastal Tamow (porcotherium costalis)
Creator: Detoxicated
Ancestor: Marine Tamow

Habitat: Jlindy Tropical Coast, Jlindy Tropical Beach

Size: 2m long

Diet: Herbivore (Olltooka, Carnurtain Leaves, Snotflora, Marbleflora, Pioneer Raftballs, Colonial Bobiiro, Stalk Rastum, Carnosprawl Leaves, Carnosprawl sap)

Reproduction: Sexual, Live Birth, Two Genders, Pouch and Milk

The Coastal Tamow split from its ancestor, the Marine Tamow, and replaced it in the Jlindy Tropical Coastal area. It has abandoned the use of the raft, and instead lives on the sandy shores of Jlindy Tropical Coast, while hunting in its waters for food. Each day it slowly moves to the sea, from the land looking rather inept for land. This is due to its change in body composition, which is now more suited for maneuvering the waters.

Its tail has grown a slight amount, and its hind legs have become smaller, while also facing backwards now. The hindleg claws have developed more pronounced webbing to ease swimming. The front legs have become shorter, but remain as muscular as its ancestors. The front leg claws have become larger and barbed. The barbed claws make cutting into the Carnosprawl bark alot easier and can also be used to stab into fruit or leaves the Coastal Tamow wants to eat. Its ears have become smaller and more aligned to its head, taking a triangular form, to easen its swimming.

It has become especially fond of the sap of Carnosprawls, but will eat any plant that is not poisonous to itself and available.
Besides these aspects, it is quite similar to its ancestor.

I'm not so sure about the barbed claws. Wouldn't having thicker hooked claws or simpler serrations do the same job more effectively?

" Each day it slowly moves to the sea, from the land looking rather inept for land. This is due to its change in body composition, which is now more suited for maneuvering the waters."
You surely meant:

"Each day it slowly moves to the sea from the land, looking rather unsuited for land life."
You should elaborate on its "change in body composition". That suggests its molecular or chemical composition is different, such as by having a greater proportion of its mass made up of blubber. That particular example would make sense, since a bunch of marine mammals have blubber, but the picture and past ancestry would suggest it's more like a sea otter.

"taking a triangular form, to easen its swimming." "Easen" is not a word. You surely meant "ease". Although it made sense for it to gain smaller or more streamlined ears, the fact the rest of its body isn't particularly hydrodynamic makes this questionable.

It has a rather large nose and a rather flat-faced, brachycephalic-style head, even given its flat-faced ancestor. Now, this "wombat in the style of Rocko's Modern Life" sort of look could make sense if it specialized in crunching up hard foods, encouraging short but massive jaws, but the image would still need to be modified.

I can't parse its nose, so that will have to be modified. If you want to keep a similar shape, though, looking at hooded seals or elephant seals could provide inspiration on why its nose would be so bulbous.

I second Disgustedorite's observation. The easiest way to deal with the weird claws and nose is saying they're sexual display features or ornamentation specifically for the mating season. (not the best explanation, but Alpha has looser standards than Beta.)

So youre saying to make the Front claws thicker, or do you mean the ones on the back?
About the nose, IT would probably be smaller or what so you mean?

I'm saying you should lengthen the snout overall, to make it more plausible it could still eat, instead of having a smashed-in pug-like face. Keeping the big, bulbous nose is plausible, with some explanation.

It's hard to read how its musculature works. Do its palms face downwards or inwards?

It will be necessary to make drastic modifications to the image, if not redraw it entirely.

Wouldn't membranes on the front claws allow for more improved swimming capability?

@Detoxicated do you intend to continue this?

Detoxicated Hey, due to inactivity, I am moving this to the graveyard. It's not outright rejected, but if you could fix the issues listed here and resubmit it should be good to go.