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This has an interesting look and body plan.

That's....an unusual way to describe just "mating". One wouldn't want Google to get the wrong idea.
"both Wubs will be fertilized". Don't you mean "their eggs will be fertilized"?
"nearly a hundred egg." That should be pluralized.
"Wubs have evolve" should be "Wubs have evolved".
"population numbers. Vast swarms of them crawling over every available flora." Those sentences should be merged.


This post has been edited by Coolsteph: Feb 21 2021, 08:21 AM

Made the edits, and yes, I was intending for them to have a more distinct appearance for a land-bound Wingworm that didn't walk on its wings or had stubby legs underneath it.

Edit to diet as per Dorite's suggestion.