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"The two digits on their hand have become long with large claws to help pull down branches for their mouths." I recommend: "The two digits of the hand have become longer with large claws, helping them pull down branches to their mouths."

"using their large claws" Its large claws.

I like the color gradation and design.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ May 18 2021, 06:26 PM)

"The two digits on their hand have become long with large claws to help pull down branches for their mouths." I recommend: "The two digits of the hand have become longer with large claws, helping them pull down branches to their mouths." "using their large claws" Its large claws. I like the color gradation and design.

Alright, made some edits!

Thank you!

Beautiful species, I love how serene its face looks.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?:
What changes?:

• External?: Claw Growth, Coloration
• Internal?: Hearing thru Jaw Bone, Loss of Echolocation
• Behavioral/Mental?: Herding, Male fighting

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: Yes

Habitat:
Type?: 1/2
Flavor?: 2/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: N (1 m -> 3m Tall)
Exception?: Low Competition

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?:
Transition Rule?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Diet expanded to other flora

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: Ancestor needs it listed

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Y
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved


I can't accept the genus change for the Grabnub, the radical changes to the species means they're too different.

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Jun 10 2021, 03:36 PM)

Approval Checklist: Art: Art Present?: Y Art clear?: Y Gen number?: Y All limbs shown?: Y Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y Realistic additions?: Y Name: Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y Creator?: Y Ancestor: Listed?: What changes?: External?: Claw Growth, Coloration Internal?: Hearing thru Jaw Bone, Loss of Echolocation Behavioral/Mental?: Herding, Male fighting Are Changes Realistic?: Y New Genus Needed?: Yes Habitat: Type?: 1/2 Flavor?: 2/3 Connected?: Y Wildcard?: N Size: Same as Ancestor?: N Within range?: N (1 m -> 3m Tall) Exception?: Low Competition Support: Same as Ancestor?: Y Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A Other?: N/A Diet: Same as Ancestor?: Transition Rule?: Reasonable changes (if any)?: Respiration: Same as Ancestor?: Y Does It Fit Habitat?: Y Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y Other?: Diet expanded to other flora Thermoregulation: Same as Ancestor?: Y Does It Fit Habitat?: Y Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A Other?: Ancestor needs it listed Reproduction: Same as Ancestor?: Y Does It Fit Habitat?: Y Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A Other?: N/A Description: Length?: Good Capitalized correctly?: Y Replace/Split from ancestor?: Y Other?: N/A Status: Approved I can't accept the genus change for the Grabnub, the radical changes to the species means they're too different.

Very well...I’ll have to change the genus name for the Gnawsferatu then

I would like to change the genus name of this into Dolichopakhohippus

MNIDJM could I please do that?