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I like the design, color, and shading.

"broken off" should be "broken-off".
"their thagomizer" should be "their thagomizers".

Consider the following:
"One should beware the Romans for their well-organized armies and long sword." Romans would not all possess a single sword among them; they would have multiple swords. Do they outlive their poison reserves, or does it accumulate within their bodies practically indefinitely?

"notable larger" should be "notably larger".
"both are adults are" Did you mean "both are adults who are" or "both adults are"?

You mentioned "almost no natural predators". Are you suggesting that there would probably be a few predators in the near future, or that they already have predators which eat the young before they're sufficiently poisonous? If so, could you point out a few?

Made the fixes. I also fixed the reproduction due to an error pointed out to me on the discord.

The "broken off" and "thagomizer" errors are still there.
EDIT: Corrected my own inexplicable repetition error.

Oh, my bad. I've fixed it.

QUOTE (Nergali @ Jun 13 2021, 02:31 PM)

Made the fixes. I also fixed the reproduction due to an error pointed out to me on the discord.

"With up to three dozen eggs laid", this should be updated admittedly...

Thank you for pointing that out, I've fixed it.