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"their camouflage" That should be "the shadow buttpipers", plural, or "its camouflage", representative singular.

I like its color scheme and pose.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ May 20 2021, 01:35 AM)

"their camouflage" That should be "the shadow buttpipers", plural, or "its camouflage", representative singular. I like its color scheme and pose.

Alright made the edit!

Thank you!

Seeing this makes me wonder if baby buttpipers are born with developed butt-sacks, or if they develop as they mature, resulting in their equivalent of voice breaking (aka like what we go through in puberty when our voices deepen).

OviraptorFan Do you have more to do, or am I good to review?

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Jun 10 2021, 03:41 PM)

OviraptorFan Do you have more to do, or am I good to review?

Nope, I think it’s good enough for you to review!

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?:
What changes?:

• External?: Camouflage
• Internal?: N/A
• Behavioral/Mental?: N/A

Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: No

Habitat:
Type?: 2/2
Flavor?: 1/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Within range?: N/A
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?:
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Replaced
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved