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@colddigger

You're missing several commas and have too many apostrophes.

These are some of the modifications I did to certain parts.

"The Chickenpear split from its ancestor, the Needlewing, and took on a more biennial niche."

"After a year, they will have reached mature size and will begin seeking a mate."

"Its chemical signaling to the mother's body has increased focus"

"Eventually, the mother's body will begin to mummify"

"Over the next handful of weeks, the developing offspring"

"At some point eventually, the mother's body fails"

I probably missed a couple, but I was able to get these.

Cool, edits have been added.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?:
What changes?:

• External?: Coloration, wings, legs, buoyancy
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?:

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: Y

Habitat:
Type?: 1/2
Flavor?: 2/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y ( 40 cm -> 60 cm)
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Transition Rule?: Y ( Omnivore -> Scavanger)
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Y
Capitalized correctly?: N
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved

I'm pretty sure I'm done updating it