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Did you use the side view of the Running Secretmaw's face as a reference for the head?


Here it is in case you have not!

Also, where exactly does it live? It seems like it inhabits the Drake Boreal Biome but is that the only area?

This post has been edited by OviraptorFan: Oct 6 2021, 08:38 PM

It's been so long since I've worked on this that I don't recall if I did. Are you suggesting I add another nostril?

The number of nostrils corresponds to the number of teeth. It shouldn't change unless it lost some teeth.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Oct 7 2021, 12:58 AM)

It's been so long since I've worked on this that I don't recall if I did. Are you suggesting I add another nostril?

I was more referring to the shape of the trunk, as your species looks like it has a really short trunk. Also I feel like the tail is too short, making the sauceback look front heavy and that it would fall on its face if it tried to move. Also it looks like it only has a single digit on each foot, when they should have two.
Also the more I look at it the more I feel like it’s a new genus

This post has been edited by OviraptorFan: Oct 11 2021, 07:22 PM

The submission is now complete. I have updated the art to show two toes, although the angle may make them hard to see, added another nostril, and made the snout look slightly less short by adding another wrinkle. I also updated the description and filled out the template.

Where are its spiracles and what is going on with its sauce?

The original, final, PNG version of the file got corrupted, so I had to re-add some finishing touches. Evidently, I forgot to add the spiracles that time around. I have re-added them and made the sauce look better.

I have updated its diet by including a few genus groups, and added a few notes about its frequent migrations to the upper reaches of Drake Boreal. (I figured it was implausible something of its size, barring significant food-storing adaptations, could be Drake Alpine-exclusive other than in the winter, which was implied)

The title lacks a number

Does this matter?

This post has been edited by colddigger: Nov 16 2021, 10:46 PM

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 17 2021, 12:43 AM)

The title lacks a number Does this matter?

I don't believe it really matters unless multiple Generations are being processed at overlapping times, which is not the case.

Actually that is the case, but people who need to finish their week 24 submissions are being slow.

I'm interested in the dust bath for infants thing, as I thought they would be worms.

I have clarified the reproduction.