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"it's ancestral": its ancestral.
"ancestors fast budding": ancestors' fast budding.
"as individual can": an individual can.
"year, Individuals": "year, with individuals".
There's no need to capitalize season names.
"that's are" That are formed.
"an attest": testament, or "and so attest".

The fact there aren't specific watershed biomes in Alpha probably means watersheds are neglected. This is good.

If you can't improve the contrast and trim the sides for the art, I can do it for you later.

This reminds me of the Tirils from "Parallel Botany". You know that book?

Edits are done,
If you are able to improve contrast you're welcome to, I'm not sure why it ended up so dark.

I'm not familiar with the book, it sounds fun to read.

This post has been edited by colddigger: Oct 23 2021, 06:37 PM

I think this might be one of my favorite designs for a pioneeroot split, and the little scene you've depicted is very nice. The paragraph spacing seems to be a bit off, unless some of those were meant to be apart of the same one.

Here's the contrast-improved version of the art. It was simple to do: I simply toggled the brightness and contrast settings of GIMP.

Thank you, I will replace it

I cannot seem to access a regular jpg version of this from imgur.

This post has been edited by colddigger: Nov 18 2021, 07:30 PM

QUOTE (colddigger @ Nov 18 2021, 09:27 PM)

Thank you, I will replace it I cannot seem to access a regular jpg version of this from imgur.

Are you asking about the image URL?

It's https://i.imgur.com/NvhK8nQ.png.

Thank you