Where are its nostrils?

that one background example is difficult to visually connect to the other two that have their wings folded, Can a vinelike one without its wings out like that also be depicted?

It needs to list the driftwoods and have an explanation for how it's in so many disconnected landmasses.

Did you see my comment about the positions of the bubbles?

The note about the opportunity shrew is odd. I don't remember it being a coastal predator.

And how do members that are forced to leave survive, exactly?

Also, how do they gather food when interlinked with the nimbus?

What about the pores? They are visible in the ancestor.

Endoskeleton material should be specified

This seems a tad too rotund to glide.

Alrighty, then approved

Does anyone have any constructive comments before I review this?

Does anyone have any constructive comments before I review this?

QUOTE (colddigger @ Apr 29 2023, 03:02 PM)

Oh that's weird. Okay.

so yeah, it should be changed or justified

the 4x is for size increase, not decrease.

Does anyone have a constructive comment before I give this a review?

I disagree.

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Does anyone have a constructive comment before I give this a review?

@Coolsteph are you satisfied with the edits?

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Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: less columnar growth, strong branches dominating central body structure, broader canopy, trumpeted summer leaves, clumped winter leaves, more microsporangia which are tightly packed, wing-shaped megasporangium which erupts on impact with the ground
• Internal?: not really it seems
• Behavioral/Mental?: n/a

Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: already done

Habitat:
Type?: 2/3
Flavor?: 3/3
Connected to Ancestor?: y
Contiguous?: y
Wildcard?: n/a

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Within range?: y
Exception?: n/a

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: y
Does It Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Does it Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Description:
Length?: y
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: n/a

Status: Approved

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown?: y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?: y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: Thin forking trunk, smooth bark, leaf shape, long chains of microsporangia, megasporangia are more specialized and produce fewer megaspores
• Internal?: Defensive compounds in young growth
• Behavioral/Mental?: Shedding bark to remove parasites

Are Changes Realistic?: Yes
New Genus Needed?: Already done

Habitat:
Type?: 2/3
Flavor?: 3/3
Connected to Ancestor?: y
Contiguous?: y
Wildcard?: n/a

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: No - what is the justification for being smaller than 0.5x?
Exception?: n/a

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: y
Does It Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: I honestly think heartwood should be mentioned

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Does it Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: addition of lenticles
Other?: n/a

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: n/a
Other?: n/a

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: addition of asexual budding
Other?: very good adaptation

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?: n/a

Status: Pending - see highlighted issues