| QUOTE (HethrJarrod @ May 25 2023, 11:33 AM) | ||
I envisioned them kinda like palm trees. The trunk is made from the remnants of older leaves. [post picture here of palm tree trunk] |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ May 25 2023, 07:00 AM) |
| “Pours”: “pores”. “And is why it is called “Royal””. (“Royal” should not be capitalized here.) Rotting things can vary greatly in nutritional composition and how readily fungi/other decomposers can break them down. Train wrecker mushrooms, for example, are wood specialists, while hat-thrower fungi are dung specialists. Since this is a single species and not a genus group, limiting its diet makes even more sense. These pores must be shallow if the Hikerflora can still photosynthesize, unless there is a clear membrane above those pores. |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ May 25 2023, 08:23 AM) |
| I thought the ancestor was also asexual, not that I like that I think that giving these guys regular black Flora combining spores makes more sense. |

| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ May 24 2023, 10:24 AM) |
I will say that perhaps these would look less anatomical if they had more roots extending off of the big tubers. I can't imagine a tuber as the only root being very stable. |

| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ May 24 2023, 10:21 AM) |
| But if they just don't have a cap and are nothing but roots, herbivores don't even see them. So not even those with immunity can eat them. Couldn't the berries by held out far from the body? so they can be plucked without getting too close. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ May 24 2023, 09:39 AM) |
| Asexual-only puts them at a disadvantage and makes the above-ground portion useless and vestigial altogether. Are you sure about this? Having non-poisonous berries in addition to the poison would actually give them an advantage over other shrooms, as fauna can't just eat the whole thing. |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ May 24 2023, 06:37 AM) |
| Feedback Round 2: The “so much so” sentence can’t stand on its own, so the semicolon should be replaced with a colon. “Root eating”: “root-eating”. “Waxy shine. Which helps them”: “shine, which helps them”. “Leaves. The leaves’”: “leaves, and the leaves’”. “Half eaten”: “half-eaten”. “Their leaves while not”: “Their leaves, while not”. “Is important”: “are important”. “It’s sweeter taste”: “its sweeter taste”. “Falls of” :”fall off”. “Release their spores”: “release its spores.” There’s a recurring error of misplaced periods when other punctuation is appropriate and pronoun issues, so I suggest paying particular attention to that with future submissions. With these minor issues fixed, this should be ready for approval, assuming there are no objections to its rather humanoid orchid-tubers (yes, I'm going to say it). |

| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ May 23 2023, 08:00 PM) |
| Image: The “beige hairy potato” look of its tubers sure is disturbing to look upon. What is with blackflora and occasionally disquieting shapes? Anyway, it’s hard to say whether that’s actually worth modifying. Template: For “support”, “Cellulose” can surely be assumed, not only because it’s a straightforward Earth-like configuration but because many descendants on the Sunstalk on Fermi have it. Description: “It is quick growing[…]soil around them”. The pronouns don’t match. There should be a space after “them.” in that sentence. “Dry season. So much so” The period should be a colon. I checked whether staying dormant for 5 years makes sense. A quick check suggests that similar plants with long underground dormancy periods are though to get energy from fungal associations. I recommend finding a source on any Earth plants which do the same without a fungal association, or scaling down the dormancy period to, say, 2 years. (see: https://sercblog.si.edu/is-your-plant-dormant/) “to help them retain moisture.” This suggests design, which is misleading. “Which helps them retain moisture” is better. “Leaves lighter”: “leaves’ lighter”. “to help”: “that help”. “Herbivores. However”: I recommend merging the two with a comma and replacing “however” with “but”. The description is sufficient, but small. Could you add more detail? Is it nutritious? Tender? How long does it take to grow to maturity? What conditions increase the likelihood of spore production? Are they prone to any parasites or illnesses? (If it’s long lived, grows by budding from the roots, and has no option for sexual reproduction, it probably does. The hot, dry weather of its habitats and Sagan 4’s limited diversity of parasites/diseases probably still makes this viable, though.) Do they all look like disquieting hairy potatoes? Other Feedback: Sunstalks are such a widespread, diverse, long-lasting, ecologically important lineage that they would probably deserve the title of “mascot flora”, or at least a dedicated sunstalks-descendant page separate from “Black Flora” on the group overview. (I’d do that myself, of course, but there are a lot of organisms to approve first.) The “beige hairy potato” look of its tubers sure is disturbing to look upon. What is with blackflora and occasionally disquieting shapes? It’s interesting to see it develop a grey color and black spikes. It’s like convergent evolution with Fermi desert-descended Sunstalk descendants. P.S. @colddigger, do you have more to say about this submission? Surely it's worth more than a brief quote from the all-around celebrity robot Mettaton of the hit game Undertale. |

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| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 30 2023, 05:19 PM) | ||||
So your species does have 4 toes? they just aren't visible due to the angle? |
| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 30 2023, 05:10 PM) |
"They actually do have 4 toes, its just the angle wasn't the easiest to depict it" ![]() |
| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 30 2023, 04:11 PM) |
| I was going to say "yeah, but it looks like its just nothing but a ribcage" And then I looked up a giraffe skeleton ![]() Turns out they also have pretty much just a ribcage for their entire torso. So I guess thats not a problem. |

| QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 30 2023, 04:17 PM) |
| Though i did notice that this guy still only have three digits on each limb, rather than the four seen in their direct ancestor. Plus there has been no mention in the description that describes a digit being lost. I also see that the skull is not that deep, would that potentially limit their diet to the softer parts of flora since i imagine a less deep skull means less powerful jaw muscles and thus a weaker bite. |
