| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 27 2022, 01:35 AM) | ||
no he doesn't |
| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Sep 26 2022, 06:49 PM) |
| I'm back (at least briefly). "The Bristlekrugg are" (Plural error). "mandibles, that allow" The comma should be removed. Clearly, Bristlekruggs are white, so pointing that out in the description does seem superfluous. I recommend merging the paragraph starting with "These bristles" with the paragraph starting with "The Bristlekrugg". "behavior; grooming" should be: "behavior: grooming." "await the young bristlekruggs". You mean, "wait for the young bristlekruggs". I recommend merging "They will feed[...]" into the same paragraph as "after drifting[...]". "decent first meal..." The ellipsis should be replaced with a comma. You'll neeed to fill in that conspicuous white space near the bristle on the rear. Can you smooth out the black bristles into the grey parts so they blend in better? That they wait for the bristlekrugg eggs to hatch suggest they develop and hatch very quickly. The wet, warm conditions of the archipelago probably helps this. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 25 2022, 09:40 PM) |
| How are the rust microbes getting iron? |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 25 2022, 08:09 PM) |
| How did this disconnection evolve without going through a phase of not being able to transfer nutrients between the leaves and stem before the archimedean screw evolved? |


| QUOTE (colddigger @ Sep 23 2022, 09:58 PM) |
| How are the hairs formed |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 20 2022, 11:09 AM) |
| All the habitats in between must be listed. All species must be listed by name and I don't think it's gonna find shrews small enough to eat out there. Body length needs to be included. |



| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 12 2022, 12:27 PM) |
| From the description it sounds more like feather barbs than random tentacles now. |

| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 12 2022, 11:04 AM) |
| The ancestor's description suggests it's just like all nimbuses but building on a pile of dead ones. What you depicted is something heavier and anatomically different which would contradict the description of it weighing almost nothing. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 12 2022, 10:36 AM) |
| This also does not make sense as a diversification of its ancestor, as it is biologically considerably different. |
| QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Sep 12 2022, 09:40 AM) |
| A genus group must have a minimum of 3 species depicted. |
