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QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Jan 12 2022, 12:43 AM)

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jan 12 2022, 12:17 AM) "While a rackettoon usually does make their own burrows, ":"its own burrows". "rackettoon if they remained active" You meant: "it". "snapperkys": You meant: "Snapperkies." "-whether made by themselves or used by something else-" That needs an emdash. Tried to do the grammar edits, do they look good?

Do these look good Coolsteph?

Yes, it looks good.