Sagan 4 Forum [Menu]

Looks dope!

Thank you!

so...

Since this is a retroactive sub, is it okay to make a reference to specifically the generation that comes after the time it is subbed in? I'm referring to this line:

QUOTE

As of Generation 149, 35 species of Oozocorn are described to exist, but for sake of brevity, only three will be showcased for the illustration.

I think its fine, but I could be completely wrong. So I would recommend asking 1g1 or dorite for their opinions on it.

I wouldn't do it.

Alrighty,
I'll fix it up to be more contemporary

Alrighty,
now that I've made the fix, how does it look to you guys now?

Looks fine to me, from what I see so far. Perhaps, under mucus application, a possibility is that it also coats itself in a specialized mucus that deters external parasites?

QUOTE (Nergali @ Jul 10 2022, 11:32 AM)

Looks fine to me, from what I see so far. Perhaps, under mucus application, a possibility is that it also coats itself in a specialized mucus that deters external parasites?

Sorry for not forwarding back to you sooner. I just added in your suggested changes.

"albeit now tanned into a more durable and cohesive material."

I believe you meant turned instead of tanned. Other than that, this looks pretty good and has my approval.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name: Oozocorns
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: (Myxophoroceros spp.)
Creator?: Sad-Dingus with colors by Nergali

Ancestor: Smaraslim Bubblehorn
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Genus group, Eggs in ootheca, Smaller Size
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?: Able to feed on larger prey, Suffocating prey with mucus OR using numbing mucus to paralyze prey

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) Already taken care of

Habitat: Drake, Darwin
Type?: N/A
Flavor?: N/A
Connected?: N/A
Wildcard?: Genus Group

Size: 9-18 cm long
Same as Ancestor?: No, see External Changes
Within range?: Yes
Exception?: No

Support: Exoskeleton (shell), Endoskeleton (hydrostatic)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet: Adult: Carnivore; Larvae/juvenile: Detritivore
Same as Ancestor?: N/A
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration: Passive (diffusion through skin)
Same as Ancestor?: N/A
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation: Ectothermic
Same as Ancestor?: N/A
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction: Sexual, eggs in ootheca
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: What are their genders? Hermaphrodites, One Gender, etc?

Description:
Length?: Reasonably articulate, though the gender details should also be mentioned in the Reproduction section
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Status: Approved