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This is a very lovely design. The only suggestion I have right now is perhaps spacing between the paragraphs, and the list of species being dispersed being listed under its own section near the bottom, such as under:

-- Species Dispersal --

Alright, made some adjustments! How does this look?

Very nice.

After the fact that this species might potentially break up the timeline of Maineac if approved as it was and proposals on how to address it, I have made some nessecary edits

Hydroblaster evolved in gen 149 so can't be spread

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ Aug 18 2022, 10:40 PM)

Hydroblaster evolved in gen 149 so can't be spread

Ah okay, i'll remove it then

After much discussion with the other moderators and higher-ups and the time taken with this submission, I ultimately have decided that this organism needs to be fixed in 4 days (Not counting today) or it will have to be rejected.

I apologize for this.

QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Sep 3 2022, 10:53 PM)

After much discussion with the other moderators and higher-ups and the time taken with this submission, I ultimately have decided that this organism needs to be fixed in 4 days (Not counting today) or it will have to be rejected. I apologize for this.

Then can we please finish up the discussion?? I keep responding to your comments but nothing is happening!

I have altered the deadline to September 11 11:59 PM Pacific Time.

So everyone can be on board to discuss more properly.

So after many discussions, the list has seen major changes and the description has been edited accordingly.

I believe it is now ready for approval.

Would anyone mind if I did so?

Go for it

It looked like the list got a trim

QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Sep 12 2022, 01:01 AM)

I believe it is now ready for approval. Would anyone mind if I did so?

One recommendation: I recommend the paragraphs be split into sub-sections. If the ecological details have been settled, I can go over the description of the organism itself in a few hours to check for typos and clarity.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name: Arkcrafting Hookphlyer
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: (Diluvimancerxia itenerimunitor)
Creator?: OviraptorFan

Ancestor: Swift Hookphlyer
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Larger size, change of pigments, "quasi-thumbs", strange beak shape, hardening saliva
• Internal?: Weaker Photosynthesis
• Behavioral/Mental?: Boat-building, pseudo-farming

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) Already taken care of

Habitat: North Barlowe Tundra, Maineiac Polar Beach, Nergali Polar Beach, Maineiac Volcanic, Nergali Polar Coast, Ittiz Polar River, Ittiz Polar Riparian, Maineiac Polar Riparian, Ittiz Bog, Ittiz Salt Bog, Maineiac Salt Bog, Maineiac Polar River
Type?: 2/2
Flavor?: 4/3 (I think I got it right???)
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: Yes

Size: 80 centimeter wingspan, 20 centimeters long
Same as Ancestor?: No, see External Changes
Within range?: Yes (In terms of insular evolution)
Exception?: No

Support: Endoskeleton (Unjointed Wood)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet: Omnivore, Weak Photosynthesis
Same as Ancestor?: N
Transition Rule?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration: Active (Lungs)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation: Heterotherm (Basking, Muscle-Generated Heat)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?: N/A

Reproduction: Sexual, Two Genders, Live Birth
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: HOLY [[Cungadero]], is it a long description!
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: After numerous trials, tribulations, and a proposal, I can safely say this species is...

Status: Approved