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Could you add more spacing between the paragraphs please?

What do they do during wildfires and over winter?

I *still* don't see any whiskers

Colddigger, making a shrog? Somehow, this seems odd or surprising to me. Not in a bad way, just weird. Cool shrog, though!

Quick note, I'm currently making a species that uses its claws to tear open ballshrog nests. Some kind of defense against predators might be good to add.

All thingies addressed except for whiskers

I also added food storage

This post has been edited by colddigger: Aug 10 2022, 09:17 PM

QUOTE (colddigger @ Aug 11 2022, 01:17 AM)

All thingies addressed except for whiskers I also added food storage

When do you plan to address the whiskers…

This is a very quick check. I'll have to go over the rest later.

Can you increase the contrast or use the magic wand tool to erase the gray background? The gray background makes it less readable. I think the organism is supposed to be purplish, but due to the low twilight-esque contrast, it looks like a vaguely purplish gray.

"it's ancestor" should be "its ancestor".

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Aug 26 2022, 10:32 AM)

I think the organism is supposed to be purplish, but due to the low twilight-esque contrast, it looks like a vaguely purplish gray.

That might be the intentional coloration. Though I could be very wrong.

QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Aug 26 2022, 03:53 AM)

QUOTE (colddigger @ Aug 11 2022, 01:17 AM) All thingies addressed except for whiskers I also added food storage When do you plan to address the whiskers…

This question still holds up

QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Sep 4 2022, 09:49 PM)

QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Aug 26 2022, 03:53 AM) QUOTE (colddigger @ Aug 11 2022, 01:17 AM) All thingies addressed except for whiskers I also added food storage When do you plan to address the whiskers… This question still holds up

Fixed updated

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Aug 26 2022, 08:32 AM)

This is a very quick check. I'll have to go over the rest later. Can you increase the contrast or use the magic wand tool to erase the gray background? The gray background makes it less readable. I think the organism is supposed to be purplish, but due to the low twilight-esque contrast, it looks like a vaguely purplish gray. "it's ancestor" should be "its ancestor".

It seems you forgot to address this, Colddigger.

I already increased the saturation, white point, and "pop" in my images because I know you like that stuff, I'm not going to further edit the background because that just makes it look strange.

I'll fix the its

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Tail fin
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?: Hunt from Nest

Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed?: No Same genus

Habitat:
Type?: 1/3
Flavor?: 1/3
Connected?: N/A
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved