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QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Sep 4 2022, 07:16 PM)

being constantly on the move as they mow down the land of any low growing vegetation.

I’m pretty sure that this should probably be reworded to something like just “mow down any low growing vegetation” or “strip the land of any low growing vegetation”, as you can’t really just “mow down the land”.

QUOTE (Oofle @ Sep 5 2022, 12:50 PM)

QUOTE (OviraptorFan @ Sep 4 2022, 07:16 PM) being constantly on the move as they mow down the land of any low growing vegetation. I’m pretty sure that this should probably be reworded to something like just “mow down any low growing vegetation” or “strip the land of any low growing vegetation”, as you can’t really just “mow down the land”.

Alright, made the necessary edit

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?:y
Art clear?:y
Gen number?:y
All limbs shown?:y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?:y
Realistic additions?:y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?:y
Creator?:y

Ancestor:
Listed?:y
What changes?:
External?: bigger
Internal?: enlarged digestive tract
Behavioral/Mental?: pit digging no burrows
Are Changes Realistic?:
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why)

Habitat:
Type?: 3
Flavor?:3
Connected?: y
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?:n
Within range?:y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Transition Rule?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:y, loss of scavenging

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?:y
Does It Fit Habitat?:n/a
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?:n
Does It Fit Habitat?:y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y elaboration
Other?:

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: y now lays eggs in shallow pits
Other?:

Description:
Length?: good
Capitalized correctly?: seems so
Replace/Split from ancestor?: split
Other?:

Opinion: Approved

Agreed