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"faired poorly" (fared poorly)
"particular fruitful" (particularly fruitful)

provide a quick should (do you mean "shroud" or "snack"?)

" one to two little ones" For a scientific description, you should say "offspring", "infants", or something similar.

"well developed fore claws" should be "well-developed forelimb claws".

Do they squeak when held?

Made the changes, and still haven't managed to procure one to test that. They tend to bolt immediately upon being seen.

You forgot to fix "quick should".

Do you think it's worth mentioning they bolt immediately upon being seen/when approached by large organisms? They do have predators, judging by the mention of "starving predators".

Done and done.