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QUOTE (Nergali @ Apr 13 2020, 08:34 PM)

I'm fine with this, as the dark coloration would help it to blend in with the seafloor.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Apr 14 2020, 04:42 AM)

"It will quickly dart away before the creature has the chance to attack them," Did you mean "they" (as in members of the species, collectively) or "it" (referring to a specific individual as representative of the whole species)? " Bloodfin Scylarian," The comma should not be there. "an unusual diet," The comma should be a colon. EDIT: Since this is Jvirus's submission, and I don't know if Jvirus will ever show up, should this be edited later in the compendium?

QUOTE (WereCynognathus @ Apr 14 2020, 05:38 AM)

It wouldn't be able to use its coloration to hide in the shadows at night as proposéd by the creator of this Jvirus?

Rewritten, hopefully there are no spelling errors this time around, but tell me if there are or any other issues.