"million year's time" should be "Million years' time."
"as not to" (so as not to)
If its lower limit is the midnight zone or upper midnight zone (as suggested by " but almost never deeper than the twilight zone;"), why not specify that in the global habitat range?
2 mm is 0.2 cm. The largest size in this range is 25 times larger than the smallest one. I think that is too extreme as a size range for a genus group.
Can something with this body shape and physiology even manage to range from 2 mm to 5 cm without substantial modifications within the group? Think about fairyflies: as they are " mostly ranging from 0.5 to 1.0 mm (0.020 to 0.039 in) long", the very air becomes more viscous at that size, requiring unusual feathery-looking wings.
I like the detail of an "microbial ancestor cameo" in its gametes. It's bizarre, but plausible.
"approximate to a week" Do you mean "6-8 days"? Did you choose this phrasing because the exact number of solar days on Sagan 4 isn't quite the same as that of Earth?