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continued adding more information and artwork

New suggestions for stuff to add have slowed to a stop despite my best efforts, so unless someone has another big suggestion, this description is nearing completion.

Mouth structure diagram side view slice display tongue anchoring tooth position proximity to base of nostril bulb?

Based on a suggestion from NinthMusketeer, I added a "normal" description at the start which is filled with section links for people interested in learning more about specific things mentioned.

How goes this?

Still working. Just added new text and images yesterday. I'm gonna try to get the text complete before making more art.

Decided to remove the last prompt that I was struggling with and just mark this as textually complete. Will add more sections on request, but for now I'll focus on the remaining images and also revamping the audio (once I've googled how to make a soundfont, as I intend to recreate the calls using a different sound as the base).

I ended up preferring the calls made with a modified viola, but still redid some of the sound. All audio is now complete, working on remaining art.

Cut the last planned image since it wasn't important. I'd consider this to now be done. @MNIDJM

QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Apr 3 2023, 08:55 PM)
They can also have fevers to try and cook their diseases to death.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think this is how fevers work. Temperatures that would kill diseases would also kill the body's cells. From what I recall, it has to do with a specific protein that has a sort of binding effect which helps keep cells from separating too much when too hot. During a fever, it binds the diseases and helps certain immune cells arrive quicker. This is from like, a vaguely remembered 5 minute edutainment video, so hopefully someone knows more about the subject.

Anyway, love these little critters!

fixed the fever thing.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:
  • External?:
  • Internal?:
  • Behavioral/Mental?:
Are Changes Realistic?: Yes
New Genus Needed?: Yes, Done

Habitat:
Type?: N/A
Flavor?: N/A
Connected to Ancestor?: Y
Contiguous?: Y
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/A

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: Y
Does It Fit Size?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Does it Fit Size?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved



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