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I changed the image coloration to something a little less lazy

I like it. Can’t immediately see anything obviously incorrect. Will look more in depth with a review.

Any thoughts?

Archipelago Uktank

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: y
Gen number?: y
All limbs shown? y:
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: y
Realistic additions?:
Generation number could be clearer, but is visible

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: y
Creator?: y

Ancestor:
Listed?: y
What changes?:

• External?: Pigment has darkened to protect from UV rays
• Internal?:
• Behavioral/Mental?:

Are Changes Realistic?: y
New Genus Needed?: n

Habitat:
Type?: Tropical, Subtropical
Flavor?: Coast, Beach, Rainforest, Mangal
Connected to Ancestor?: y
Contiguous?: yes
Wildcard?: n

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: n
Within range?: y
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does it Fit Lifestyle?: y
Does It Fit Size?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Transition Rule?: n
Reasonable changes (if any)?:

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Does it Fit Size?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: yes
Does It Fit Habitat?: yes
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?: Ectotherm, probably

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Does It Fit Habitat?: y
Reasonable changes (if any)?:
Other?:


Description:
Length?: short
Capitalized correctly?: yes, afaik
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Replaced isn’t the correct word to use imo
Other?:

Opinion: Pending

Minor edits, but like 95% there.

Replaced is the correct word to use here

QUOTE (MNIDJM @ May 30 2023, 07:41 PM)

Replaced is the correct word to use here

Is it replacing the Plains Uktank in Drake?

I feel replaced is a bit strong of a wording...

"The '''archipelago uktank''' replaced their ancestor, and have fully adapted to the tropics of the Ramul-Steiner region."

It's like a "I love eating my family and cats" situation.