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| QUOTE (colddigger @ May 11 2023, 01:33 AM) |
| ah a classic looking gelatin an important thing when moving any life from water to land is prevention of dessication, as well as handling fresher water, you listed darwin plains as a habitat which is a pretty hefty thing without elaboration. I would suggest mentioning that they are able to survive when rolling about waterways, soaking up the liquid as they pass through. But having a tendency of drying out and whithering away in regions where they happen to not roll into water soon enough. Also would consider such colonies rare compared to the seaside populations, likely prone to a bit of tissue rupture in heavy rains due to excessive water absorption. |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ May 11 2023, 03:17 PM) |
| " This does not always work. " Change the word this to specifically State what action you are referring to, since you had added a little bit more to the end of the previous paragraph it no longer functions as a way of referring to what was stated in the previous paragraph. That's a pretty simple fix. |
| QUOTE (colddigger @ May 23 2023, 12:48 PM) |
| https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydrostatic_skeleton This is a better choice for it, unless the chambers were removed in favor of flesh all the way through. Otherwise I too misunderstand hydrostat. |