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The template and description seem to disagree on the ancestor?

I assume the incorrect gen number will be fixed since this is a wip.

"Rivers edge" should be "river's edge", and "Young adults" should be "young adults".
"though individuals have been found capable" The sentence with this should be split into two, as it's presently breathless.
"deeper set jaw" should be "deeper-set jaw".
The art looks good.

Finished.

Any update on approval?