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" Fruiting Glog fruit" There's a missing comma after that part.
The description, though incomplete, is interesting in how poetic it is.

Thanks for pointing that out, I fixed the missing comma. And thanks fro the comment.

Didn't want to add it to the temperate areas?

Wait, Fermi has the shortface Sauceback???

Looks like it was incorrectly added to Fermi. MNIDJM Week 23 Drake Tundra biota cannot have made it to Fermi.

Looks like you meant to list Shortfaced Thornback instead of Shortfaced Sauceback

I've made the fix. Sorry about that. And yes, I'm keeping this to the colder regions, that way others can have them split into the warmer regions if they want. (That and the fact that its essentially black desert sand, so this would stick out more there).

I found a typo: "wide arrange of flora" should be "a wide range of flora".
" tactics rival those" was probably meant to be "tactics to rival those".

Thanks for pointing those out, I've made the necessary changes.

Looks good now.