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"stomps three times with each hand" It's not possible to stomp with hands.

"fir those" should be "for those".

"extra vegetarian skewers" They aren't vegetarians, nor do they have vegetarian individuals. "Vegetarianism" is a specific diet or dietary belief system. The Mediterranean diet may involve fish and whole grains, but an animal which eats fish and whole grains isn't a "Mediterranean dieter".

"acting similar to a spear" Does the Skewer Shrog itself act like a spear?

It looks like Handlicker Dundis are a popular food. Are Sitting Dundis and Dundiggers eaten, too, or are their defenses effective against them?

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Mar 12 2021, 11:13 AM)

"stomps three times with each hand" It's not possible to stomp with hands. "fir those" should be "for those". "extra vegetarian skewers" They aren't vegetarians, nor do they have vegetarian individuals. "Vegetarianism" is a specific diet or dietary belief system. The Mediterranean diet may involve fish and whole grains, but an animal which eats fish and whole grains isn't a "Mediterranean dieter". "acting similar to a spear" Does the Skewer Shrog itself act like a spear? It looks like Handlicker Dundis are a popular food. Are Sitting Dundis and Dundiggers eaten, too, or are their defenses effective against them?

I mean.....I can stomp with my hands....usually it requires a bit of force to be heard though.

That’s my only comment on that

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Mar 12 2021, 09:13 AM)

"stomps three times with each hand" It's not possible to stomp with hands. "fir those" should be "for those". "extra vegetarian skewers" They aren't vegetarians, nor do they have vegetarian individuals. "Vegetarianism" is a specific diet or dietary belief system. The Mediterranean diet may involve fish and whole grains, but an animal which eats fish and whole grains isn't a "Mediterranean dieter". "acting similar to a spear" Does the Skewer Shrog itself act like a spear? It looks like Handlicker Dundis are a popular food. Are Sitting Dundis and Dundiggers eaten, too, or are their defenses effective against them?

I feel I’ve fixed everything.

Also, yeah, the Dundigger isn’t worth eating due to how foul it is.

I know Shrogs tend to be highly effective predators. Has this species made any species extinct or extirpated?

You should double-check how its diet overlaps with the Argusraptor Complex and where, because the Argusraptor Complex has made some of the prey on the Skewer Shrog's list extinct in some areas.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Mar 12 2021, 11:36 AM)

I know Shrogs tend to be highly effective predators. Has this species made any species extinct or extirpated? You should double-check how its diet overlaps with the Argusraptor Complex and where, because the Argusraptor Complex has made some of the prey on the Skewer Shrog's list extinct in some areas.

Good point on it possibly wiping out species, I’d have to ask Dorite if it would make any sense for it to do that.

I think the ecosystem page has already been updated to reflect all local extinctions caused by arguraptors. I also don't think this Shrog is close to being able to cause similar levels of destruction

Scientific names should not have special characters in them. This is actually an official rule for naming species in real life.

QUOTE (Disgustedorite @ Mar 12 2021, 01:09 PM)

I think the ecosystem page has already been updated to reflect all local extinctions caused by arguraptors. I also don't think this Shrog is close to being able to cause similar levels of destruction Scientific names should not have special characters in them. This is actually an official rule for naming species in real life.

Drats, not even the genus name?

Also updated.