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"the Tundra" that should not be capitalized.
"without given a single bother" That sounds like odd Internet lingo derived from Winnie the Pooh's "oh bother" catchphrase; I recommend using "without a second thought" or "carelessly trample them".
There's a spacing error in: "ancestors(taking)".

That's a unique art style. How did you make it?

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Mar 13 2021, 01:52 AM)

"the Tundra" that should not be capitalized. "without given a single bother" That sounds like odd Internet lingo derived from Winnie the Pooh's "oh bother" catchphrase; I recommend using "without a second thought" or "carelessly trample them". There's a spacing error in: "ancestors(taking)". That's a unique art style. How did you make it?

Alright, I made the edits you suggested, think its good?

Also the artstyle is the same as my other pieces. I draw the organism traditionally, then digitally color it(unless the traditional version has coloration that I think works well).

It all looks good. Does this one outcompete the Grazing Gossalizard, or did you plan on making another split?

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Mar 13 2021, 10:45 AM)

It all looks good. Does this one outcompete the Grazing Gossalizard, or did you plan on making another split?

No it does not outcompete it, as its over double the size which means they both fill different niches, even if their very subtle.

Also why do you want one of my bois to outcompete the Grazing Gossalizard so badly? Both times I made a descendant you asked if they replace it..

This post has been edited by OviraptorFan: Mar 14 2021, 11:22 PM