I was going to comment on it, but I was delayed due to technical issues and other "Real-Life Stuff".
I'd recommend using "fringed" rather than "hairy" for the gecko-like feet, unless it uses actual specialized hairs. While things can certainly be described as "hairy" despite no relation to mammalian hair, since Soriparasites are somewhat mammal-like anyway, it would be useful to specify the structure.
It seems it would have a lot of trouble getting around on the ground, but its description suggests its yellow coloration helps blend into the soil between hosts. For comparison, three-toed sloths have trouble getting around on the ground because of their front claws, and this one has proportionately even longer claws. I figure it would awkwardly inch along on its "wrists" (if it has wrists), hop along, or swim.
The skin texture is pleasant to look upon, as usual. These certainly are distinctive as a "shrew" which doesn't (seemingly) have six eyes, but a more normal, mammal-style two.
This post has been edited by Coolsteph: Mar 29 2021, 05:59 AM