| QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Apr 9 2021, 09:10 AM) |
| I like the art, and its patterning. I recommend cleaning up the leftover lines and creases in the background in GIMP. The rules say, "for the purpose of this game there shall be no non-aesthetic physical differences in sub-species. However, they may be described in terms of trends across their range (ie. being redder in the parts of its range that have redder soil, or having longer fur where it's colder). Individual subspecies may not be given specific restricted ranges." The Golden Spinebutt Plexo having a specific restricted range for Darwin Chaparral may make it violate this rule. Admittedly, the rule has gotten murkier now that various species exist in different color morphs across the Dixon-Darwin-Vivus supercontinent. Until that rule is officially revised, I recommend working with the word "restricted" and saying the species tends towards more yellow coloration in certain broad geographic ranges, with the sample image being from the Darwin Chaparral population, which might be the yellowest of the yellow populations. Chaparrals are very different from rainforests, which does raise an eyebrow, but it does fall within the "two types, three flavors" rule. "gundis" Dundis, actually. "Gundis" is for Gamergate Gundis, and it only eats one organism with "gundi" in the name. It doesn't make sense to use "Gundis" because a more logical name for the descendants of the Yellowdundi would be "Dundi". It's premature to assume all Dundis are Gundis just because Gamergate Gundis are widespread. |
| QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Apr 9 2021, 06:21 AM) |
| Yuccagave has seeds, not fruits. Also, does the plexo actually eat the puffgrass or its seeds? |
| QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Apr 9 2021, 01:01 PM) |
| I’m guessing that the young are born either without spines or rounded nubs of said spines? |