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"it's ancestor" should be "its ancestor". (this occurs twice.
"front hood" is surely "front hooves".
"it's butt" should be "its butt".
"it's eyes" should be "its eyes".
"up stream" should be "upstream", and "down stream" should be "downstream".
"each others plow" should be "each other's plow".
"lead by" should be "led by".
"sicne" is an error; you mean "since".

This sure has a unique body shape. It would probably be a pain to ride.

I’m admittedly a little iffy on how squished the torso looks, I’m guessing that’s due to it lifting its rear up?

QUOTE (TheBigDeepCheatsy @ Mar 22 2021, 12:02 PM)

I’m admittedly a little iffy on how squished the torso looks, I’m guessing that’s due to it lifting its rear up?

"It's butt has raiser [sic] higher so its "butt-nostil" can sit above the waterline when wading in the shallows."

I think this means it doesn't raise its butt, but it grows in a way that makes it seem pre-raised. I think it's like how a wildebeest face makes it look as if they are often tilting their heads slightly down, but if you look at their skeletons, their skulls actually have a strong diagonal slant relative to the more familiar-looking goat skeletons.

Hydromancerx did you make the edits Cheatsy and cool have both suggested?