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Found a little typo,
"They are able to keep ththe pasakerd in check "
when it should be
"They are able to keep the pasakerds in check"

Overall, excellent beast!

fixed, and thank you!

It doesn't list the Grazing Gossalizard in its diet list.

I wonder what the steps are for eyes getting arranged into a triangle formation specifically because of the utility of a strong jaw...how would the eyes move over time? I suppose it's hard to tell without knowing the underlying soft tissue and developmental patterns.

I like the lineart and coloration.

Fixed.

I think the movement of the eyes into a different position would probably resemble how eyes on earth vertebrates move between front- and side-facing.

Trying out something new
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Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?: White coloration, size increase, new habitat, crown, social change, skull changes, eye position
Are changes realistic?: Y
New Genus needed?: Y

Habitat:
Type?: 1/2
Flavor?: 2/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N (4 m length -> 5m length)
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: N (Carnivore -> Carnivore, Scavenger)
Transition Rule?: NA
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: N (Gigantotherm -> Mesotherm/Gigantotherm (Blubber))
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y

Reproduction:
Same as ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Acceptable
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Y (split)


Status: Pending; Awaiting highlighted corrections

That's a really comprehensive checklist. I like it.

I changed the genus