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You forgot to add a description. Having no description or template at all is unprecedented for works in progress, and it would surely not be allowed.

EDIT: Never mind. You must have added that in the few seconds it took for me to type this.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jun 22 2021, 03:11 PM)

You forgot to add a description. Having no description or template at all is unprecedented for works in progress, and it would surely not be allowed. EDIT: Never mind. You must have added that in the few seconds it took for me to type this.

Yeah, I accidentally submitted it before I was done with the post, so I had to go into editing to finish it.

"Avoid falling prey" should be "avoid becoming prey", which sounds less 'awkward'.

Cool organism though, very colorful! It is kind of surprising that flying!saucebacks should so immediately turn around and become terrestrial hehe.

QUOTE (CosmoRomanticist @ Jun 23 2021, 02:11 PM)

"Avoid falling prey" should be "avoid becoming prey", which sounds less 'awkward'. Cool organism though, very colorful! It is kind of surprising that flying!saucebacks should so immediately turn around and become terrestrial hehe.

Alright, made the edit! Thank you for the feedback!!