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There needs to be a new name for that supercontinent...Dividaja? Or perhaps an evolutionary biologist, Sagan 4 member, or speculative biology artist? Wilson? (E.O Wilson) Perhaps a Russian biologist, since Russia is huge (if not so big as the supercontinent).

" Gamergate Gundis’" The apostrophe is not needed.

"Moderate sized" should be "moderately-sized".

The description seems small: more than half the description is describing other Gamergate Gundi-eaters.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jun 25 2021, 05:42 PM)

"Moderate sized" should be "moderately-sized".

There is no hyphen after any adverb ending with -ly since that suffix already modifies the next word—no hyphen needed. So it would be "moderately sized."

Changes made.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Larger
• Internal?: longer proboscis and tongue, sticky saliva
• Behavioral/Mental?:

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: N

Habitat:
Type?: 2/2
Flavor?: 1/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: N/A

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y (5-10 -> 17 cm)
Exception?:

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: N/A
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: N
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: N/A

Status: Approved