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"to deter predators from grabbing it"
I would suggest "which deters predators from grabbing it" instead.

I recommend "pack hunting" and "tightly knit" get a hyphen.

"Brightly colored heads"? Is that sexual dimorphism? Mating-season-specific coloration?

I like this scaly-looking murderous Protoceraptors-esque fauna.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jul 7 2021, 07:15 PM)

" "to deter predators from grabbing it" I would suggest "which deters predators from grabbing it" instead. I recommend "pack hunting" and "tightly knit" get a hyphen. "Brightly colored heads"? Is that sexual dimorphism? Mating-season-specific coloration? I like this scaly-looking murderous Protoceraptors-esque fauna.

Made your suggested edits.

Yes, its only found on males like in their ancestor.

Aw thanks! I feel like their going to affect the ecosystem around them due to their aggressive nature.